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Or you could just drop the yaoi all together and opt for shounen ai.

Epsilon wrote:Also, did you ever name the fic? I have a few more suggestions for the title if you are interested!

I still like Digital Fusion, myself. >.>

apostle13 wrote:I didn't mean fix everything wrong with the fic. Geez.

I don't think you quite got my point. You're not getting any better as a writer if you don't learn from mistakes.

Questions? Comments? How's my driving? Posttt. And nuu, don't even think about editing it, I don't need another English teacher, one is enough, kthnx. :p You asked for opinions, how're you suposed to improve your skills as a writer if you don't take the advice and learn from it? If you don't want a...