And so it begins...

[Elk]

*Nails plank across ECF's forehead, which reads-*

ABANDON HOPE, ALL YE WHO SUBMIT SUB-PAR STUFF HERE!

*blood drips down forehead* ._.;;
Did you notice that Duskino is doing the samething I do? We're evil partners in safety. XB

It's not like he should abandon Hope.. it's just that he shouldn't post pointless non-.hack stories, or brag about his "OH SO GREAT .HACK" story, weeks before posting it.... What a shame.. all his "advertisement" turned out to be false...

*nailguns Albedo* Baka.

[YashaOokami]

That way you don't need to open your yap so much. I'm being nice, mind. You waste less energy this way.

Being...NICE? Why should YOU even bother with it?
You already see the outcome..not just Elk is talking about it,but Duskino,Dude and a few others have already said their opinions.
Hey..he brought this upon himself by bragging about it and saying
its going to be the "best .hack fan fic ever."So..you get people's interest alright,we like to see this so-called "Best".And what do we get...?

Not very happy customers from the look of it.. >>;

-smacks Albedo with a 2 x 4- That's for using Elk as a nail post >/!

[Duskino]

Being nice. Heh.

Whacking people with a nail post. The hip, new way to send your holiday spirit.

Anyway, I'm not going to add on to the whole suckage deal. I will keep my opinion off these boards. But I am merely critiquing in a way that could possibly help the story be better. I will say, you do NOT go around posting, "Oh my fan fic is going to be the greatest!" Because you know what? Not only is that bragging, but it also makes you look stupid, and there is no such thing as "the best fanfic ever". Unless you mean your best fanfic.

Albedo, you should stop trying to start trouble. That's all you ever seem to do. Plenty of people are starting to get sick of it.

[MeultimaSama]

^_^ Okay, Duskino-san! *Hops away like a 3-year old*

[Bear]

And that is the end of the news.

*dives off pier*