.hack//CLONES, SIGN meets INFECTION

Hema · Post by **Hema** » Fri Aug 29, 2003 9:08 pm

I spent about 20 minutes or so typing up a short, humor-based, .hack fanfic. It's kind of PG-13-ish though. http://www.geocities.com/haggle_tuxlead ... ckfic.html

For those of you that do read it, give me some feedback as to what you thought about it ^.^

Its Not a Game · Post by **Its Not a Game** » Fri Aug 29, 2003 11:22 pm

It was quite......................interesting. Well ill have to re read it since i didnt understand some of it. I did enjoy the last part though with Mistral and Kite, mostly because i could accully see Mistral doing that even if it wasnt humor based. Your effort is much respected as you rarely see any fan fics on the forum, not counting the recent one involving Evangeleon crossover.

thedudewhosadude · Post by **thedudewhosadude** » Fri Aug 29, 2003 11:41 pm

very true, the only thing i would change is put Gardinia in the place of Mistral. Her e-mail's are so descriptive..."I;m going to (here)"

Hema · Post by **Hema** » Sat Aug 30, 2003 12:21 am

I wasn't really going to do anything else to it, but I figured if enough people like it, I would add more. However with the Mistral to Gardenia thing, "It's Not A Game" likes how it's Mistral trying to fly Kite. I could give Gardenia another role. Oh and did you know that she's named after a plant? I could use that bit in my fanfic...
I could also start a group fanfic where I take everyone's suggestions here and put it alltogether (if I get enough) and then give credit to each of the users.

Its Not a Game · Post by **Its Not a Game** » Sat Aug 30, 2003 12:38 am

That might turn out interest but good luck trying to piece it all together so it makes sense

Cobweb · Post by **Cobweb** » Sat Aug 30, 2003 12:45 am

I always *knew* that about Ginkan!
Mistral: "Let's go fly a Kite
Up to the highest hight!
Oh, let's go fly a Kite!"
Kite: *dies*

.hack//INFO

.hack//CLONES, SIGN meets INFECTION

.hack//CLONES, SIGN meets INFECTION

lol