Hm...recently you've been overflowing with .hack fan-art. One suggestion: Chill. You should take more time with your work. This one, while the concept is good, isn't drawn to par of your other drawings.
You're only young once, but you're NEVER too old to be immature.
Yep... You can definitely tell that you didn't put as much effort into this one. I like Balmung's armor, but everything else in the picture just looks... Bleh. Quality over quantity, right? Pace yourself...
"Do something." -- Instructions to an arcade game in Las Vegas.
Did you just get lazy & not even take the slightest chance at drawing Orca?
I mean, besides the caption pointed at him, you can tell in no way that it is him.
As everyone said, you need to put more time into your drawings, sometimes even taking small breaks between details is good. Also, look things over & decide if changes are needed.
Putting yourself down gets you negative attention & less respect.