A fanfic titled Light of Darkness-Now with a Chapter 2!

SilverEyes · Post by **SilverEyes** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 4:15 am

https://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1567969

Ok, this...is my attempt at a fanfic. My friend was begging me to get it up, and nobody would beta read it...and I wrote it while very tired, so..yeah. I might go back and change it, but try to give it a chance. Maybe. Even though...yeah.

I can't give a good Summary without spoilers, so...Shugo and Rena find that some people need to play the game differently. There. Bad summary. Sorry....I'm tired.

EDIT..again: I'm a dork. I keep changing the title on this. I have no idea why.

Robby-san · Post by **Robby-san** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 12:20 pm

ooooo cool. The concept of a blind person playing The World is very interesting. I never even thought of that being a possability. I guess when none the characters have a physical disability you don't think about it. Im surpised that you came up with whole consept. Verry Nice

Try to make your Fan Fics more comedic like Wavemaster Minka does.

Cobalt the Blue Storm · Tue Oct 21, 2003 12:37 pm

Man that would be really wierd being blind and a playing a game. But she seem like a good first time player... or was she a first time player. Anyways thats a really good fanfic keep em comin' SilverEyes!

Duskino · Post by **Duskino** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 3:41 pm

Ooh, I like it so far! ^^ Kind of an odd concept.

And Robby, no, I don't think she should try to write like somebody else. That's her style. Deal with it.

Robby-san · Post by **Robby-san** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 7:50 pm

ok, a style is a syle. I just prefer more comedic stuff, like Love Hina. Im not telling anyone to change their style, however. I didn't mean to tell her to change her style.

I was in school and the period was allmost over, i was in a rush. Sorry.

Duskino · Post by **Duskino** » Tue Oct 21, 2003 8:12 pm

Well you can't expect comedy out of everybody.

Anyway.

SilverEyes · Post by **SilverEyes** » Thu Oct 30, 2003 4:02 am

Ahh! I actually updated! Ok, I actually updated this fanfic, and am trying to do so on a regular basis, even though....I might not be able to. Thank you for feedback...it helps tell what needs to be changed or if it's good how it is, and stuff...go to the link I posted before and turn to Chapter 2...I tried a few more ideas in there...not sure how they'll work, but it's better than the other Chapter 2 I had done, then it got deleted. I need ideas for weird events for Balmung to hold...suggestions? o.O;

Cobalt the Blue Storm · Thu Oct 30, 2003 1:22 pm

Nice update! Shes been playing 2 years and is still a newbie, but i can see why she is blind.

Robby-san · Post by **Robby-san** » Thu Oct 30, 2003 1:23 pm

cool, i like the new chapter. Keep it up, i want to see more

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A fanfic titled Light of Darkness-Now with a Chapter 2!

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