Wow, you're a very nice writer! The first story just hangs there, so we have to make our own ending. The second story has such a nice closure to it! Unfortunatly, the storyline doesn't permit Kite to be that person in the real world, but I still liked it! I liked your take on the Blackrose-Terijima dungeon, blending it in with Mimiru's dungeon and changing some text around. I liked 'What I Didn't See," but I have to ask: Is there a part 2? I thought it was supposed to be a week! Anyway, nice job!
You're only young once, but you're NEVER too old to be immature.
I recently wrote a new fic called 'Forbidden Light.' It's a story where Kite tries to teach Aura to act more human. And it IS a Kite x Aura story. Please leave a review on the site and tell me what you think of it.
Very nice! I'm starting to like your stories 'unfinished' better! The way you end them make you feel like they are done. Also, i wouldn't consider that a Kite x Aura story (i thought it was like erotica or somethin...) I believe you only use _____ x ______ in those types of stories. Regardless, i enjoyed it, especially your descriptions of Aura's emotions.
You're only young once, but you're NEVER too old to be immature.
I've recently been digging through the rest of your fanfics... and I have to say, you're a really good writer. You're the first .hack fanfic writer to get me completely hooked into their stuff ^^;
